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| "Someday You Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Title: from: fluffys_mate_kaya
Reviewed By: fluffys_mate_kaya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, you said that the only idea you got was that she should work for, him, but it's been used too much. It's better if you just follow your gut feeling, the story will turn out better. good luck
| Title: from: fluffys_mate_kaya
Reviewed By: fluffys_mate_kaya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, you said that the only idea you got was that she should work for, him, but it's been used too much. It's better if you just follow your gut feeling, the story will turn out better. good luck
| Title: Someday You Will Be Loved
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 11:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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