| "Divine Temptation" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 22:12 CDT
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i really loved it please update soon!
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Title: good title
Reviewed By: kace19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story please inform me whem you write another chapter
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Reviewed By: kagome789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ UPDATE
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Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: April 01, 2007 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY FLIPPING GOD!!! I love this srory... It's only been 5 chapters and it's already this good. Even my friend (and trust me she DOES NOT READ FANFICS) loves how funny and entertaining this story is. Keep writeing PLEASE!!!!!!! and update soon... ca't wait ;D
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: snowbound360 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Nothing can change my mind at this point. I had been reading this since the first chapter came out and I still love it. I wanted to post this sooner but I had been getting so much homework and it was hard to get on the internet most of the time but now I can say what I wanted to say and that is that your story is great ^^ *jumps with joy* I can't wait to read more so keep it up ^^
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Title: Divine Temptation
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: white tiger princess (evilcat0828@yahoo.com) On: November 04, 2005 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome start and it's turning out to be great! I can never find a camp story with a Sesshomaru/Kagome paring, they're always Inuyasha/Kagome. Another thing different is the fact that there are demons and humans live together and you can never find that in a camp like setting. Anyways, I was wondering why Kagome is letting all of Sesshomaru's sarcastic remarks go by and not saying anything about them? Is it because his attention and actions are surprising her? Or is it something else? The relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome is so cute and I hope it develops into something strong and reliable, it's the best kind of relationship between two finds when they're able to be so close to each other and not feel uncomfortable. And the parings you've set up are also cute! They all seem to fit each other perfectly...I wonder who Kikyo is going to be with? She's such an interesting character in this story, very different from other story's point of view which is a good thing. I can't wait for the plot and/or chaos (which ever direction your going in) develops more. I really do look forward to reading more, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: sadsoul On: November 03, 2005 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't listen to any flames about your pairings keep your experiment the way you have it, it makes you original :) Update soon
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Reviewed By: inu/kag 4ever On: November 02, 2005 19:47 CST
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idk y u made it sesh/kag it should be inu/kag all the way
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Reviewed By: sadsoul On: November 02, 2005 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WO HOO Love where this is going!!!!!!!!!!! Like always more Inu and rin. I love that pairing since it is rarely done and you are doing a great job with it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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