| "Caught in the Spiders Web" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Reviewed By: opalescentmoonshine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2014 16:34 EST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO!!!!!! Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're killing me!!!!
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Title: I want more
Reviewed By: RinsBleedingHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 17:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story.
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Title: How I wish you loved me
Reviewed By: EnchantressRin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 15:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reading this mster piece and waiting for it to update is pure torture. I love love love love love love love love love this story but you no update.
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Reviewed By: Soma-san [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 19:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome. The uncomfortable loving burns my eyes and makes me laugh manicly. Sesshoumaru getting tentacle raped was disturbing yet extremely funny.
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 06:14 EST
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Ohhs I have been flamed- AGAIN. In response to the review below this one. First of all the story is clearly labeled as to what it will contain. Yet you call me sick.. But your sorry ass read the damn sick thing. Isn't that interesting?--The best is you give me a 6 for spelling.--Now check all of your misspells in the review. Then you flame me using a made up name. Wow- That is soooo brave of you. *Sarcastic voice* Grow up!
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Reviewed By: happy kibi On: March 09, 2006 23:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
you should not have done that eventhough the whole tentecal thing seny shiver up my spine .i think your SISK SICK and you better make inuyasha rescue him and could ya pleeaase have inuyasha fuck sesshoumaru that'll be great.besides that ur SICK SICK SICK i tell you SICK.
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Trin71 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 21:56 EST
Comment/Review:
Ummmmmm...ya...ok... I was actually shocked when I read this. HA HA! BUT, I do like your style of writing...as perved as it is...HA HA! Good for you...good job. I'm actually curious as to what will happen to our stoic Lord of the Western Lands. ^_^ -.0 Guess that makes me a perv too. ~Laughs like crazy person~ ~Wink~ Please continue...^_^
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Reviewed By: Ren91 On: January 19, 2006 11:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad Not bad! I lov Shessy! And if he kills Naraku I will laugh my ass off! HA HA HA HA!!!
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou (not signed in) On: January 06, 2006 10:58 EST
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holy shit! that was freaking hot and dark and dayum! i really liked it, you captured sesshoumaru's attitude and defiance. (panting and wanting to be naraku... until he gets his in the end) dayum! and now he has to get rin out of naraku's hands! (dies with anticipation) keep it up, please. this is a great story! i hope you don't have too many moods that put you in the mood to write this, but i look forward to an update...
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Reviewed By: Sparks On: January 05, 2006 00:57 EST
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I could kiss you for updating. I was starting to get worried you'd abandoned this story. Good story, disturbing but good. And the plot thickens with you adding Rin. You have to update this and soon.
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Title: awwww
Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 15:32 EST
Comment/Review:
omg i feel sooo bad 4 sesshy aweeee lol srry. Anyway that yoroki dude w/e hes kool n hes nice YAY maybe he'l help sesshy goodie lmao update soon
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Reviewed By: bishieboylove nli On: January 02, 2006 08:19 EST
Comment/Review:
yeah!!!!! you finally updated this. poor sesshoumaru. naraku was so mean to him. you write naraku really good. i could feel sesshomaru's pain. i felt so bad for him. (crys) you did a evil cliffies. PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 21:46 EST
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oh I feel so bad for sesshomaru damn that naraku he is such a ass whole. why would anyone want to hurt sesshomaru he is to bishie to be beat up like that.
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Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 19:39 EST
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I really like Sessho being raped, it's knida funny. I figure this fic is more or less dead, but still... One can hope.
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Title: poor sesshie
Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 00:26 EST
Comment/Review:
I know this is mean but i have an idea 4 the next chappie since naraku is gonna try 2 humiliate sesshy wat if he tries 2 humiliate him in front on yashie that'd sound like sometin he would do. anyway i luv it so far please update soon!!!
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Title: poor sesshie
Reviewed By: sesshiesbaby On: November 06, 2005 00:14 EST
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I know this is mean but i have an idea 4 the next chappie since naraku is gonna try 2 humiliate sesshy wat if he tries 2 humiliate him in front on yashie that'd sound like sometin he would do. anyway i luv it so far please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Jerica On: November 01, 2005 18:44 EST
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Mumbles incoherently...Nar used a tentacle to jerk off Sessy. I'm going to be having wet dreams for years now! I lurve seeing Sessy so powerless.Update soon.
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Title: Wow ! O_O
Reviewed By: Carnageoflife On: October 27, 2005 16:43 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great Sess x Naraku fic. One the most twisted I've read. I think this is the first time, I've read of a tentacle being used like that. 0_0. Gotta love them tentacles! Yowza. Update soon, and I'll worship you forever. =)
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Reviewed By: Bishieboylove [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 08:08 EDT
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that was so kinky and hot. naraku jacked sesshomaru off with a tentacle.::::drools::::.i luv you! i should feel sorry for sesshomarui for what naraku is doing to him. next subject. i luv that web demon you have. PLZ UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I love all of your stories they are so good I cant wait till the next chapters are up on all of them
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 22:11 EDT
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wow. (fans self) this is an amazingly hot darkfic. i love the tentacles (drooling here!) and i love the whole story. for now, i'm only going to be capable of leaving this very flattering review for you. that's all i can give you. i'm too flustered right now to even think of something constructive or something else to say. i don't know what to think... just naraku and sesshy in the woods with tentacles... (gods... my mind is gone) i can't wait for the next update! love this story... and i can't wait for more... (slides off to shower in a cold bathroom
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Title: Let me tell you how much I love you!
Reviewed By: ladyrin_remix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Call me sick. I can't read enough stories where Sess gets raped by Naraku. The best part of it is that you might state its pwp but you actually make it worth reading. Its not just sexual smut. Its very well done. That being said...I can't wait to see what else you have in store for poor sesshie. My only criticism and it really isn't towards you...I like the fact that you made Sess stay in character. I can't stand when all of a sudden in the middle of a rape he starts enjoying and wanting more. Please tell me you are going to try to keep like he is....it make it more angsty if you do it that way. Either way I love it! Keep up the good work. And please know that I am a normal person who just happens to have this quirk.
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