| "Sand In A Cage" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 13:03 CST
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Me: Cool. GAARA IS MINE! *pounces on him* Gaara: OMG! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!? Me: I... don't... KNOW! Gaara: X_X
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 08:26 CST
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Awesome! Hey would you mind telling me what the words mean? The japanese ones I mean.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 08:14 CST
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OMG... that was confusing. AND I'M IN HIGH SCHOOL!!! 10th grade actually.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 08:12 CST
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It sounds like a very intresting story. I think I'll read it.
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Reviewed By: fLcL_FFx_lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok....it's is taking you sooooooo long to update that in that vast amount of time i have found a new favorite fanfic. just starting to wonder if u died or something....that would be dramatic
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Reviewed By: fLcL_FFx_lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i have to say this is my fav. fanfic of all time only problem is...IT'S NOT FINISHED YET!!!!
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Reviewed By: fLcL_FFx_lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story rules!!!!! before this i didn't even comsider reading gaara/neji fanfics but mind mind has been officialy changed. NOW UPDATE!!!!!
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Title: Woohoo!
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is a nice change from the normal. What really pulled me in was the fact that for once Naruto has a kind and friendly family. The idea of the sand siblings being his siblings is hysterical but really works. As for the pairings: Love love love it my dear after all my three fave pairings happen to be SasuNaru, NejiGaara and well the third one doesn't matter. Anyways so so so look forward to more. Cheers ~TRESS
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Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
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Let's see um well I haven't read anything just yet except the prologue and schedules but just the idea of Oro being a dance instructor makes me laugh my arse off. anyways just wanted to say hi! and now I'm off to read
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Title: AngelicChaos
Reviewed By: LadyMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 03:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a will strutchered, and wrounded fic. You seem to have really thought out this story. I would say that you do have some things you could work on, such as keeping some of the chareater more in chareater. Garra for expl. In the last two chaps, he was a little OC, not to much jsut a little. OK enough with my nick picking. Over all, I think this is a great story and I hope you will contoule it, and not give up on it. YOu are a good writer and with little bite more pratice I think you could and will be a great writer. Just keep working at it, and you will amaze yourself at how good you can become.
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Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 10:05 CDT
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Interesting story so far, definitely an original idea. I really like it. ^.^ And I've never read any Gaara/Neji fics before, I don't think, so this is a change. Good work, and hope you update soon.
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