| "Death is only the beginning." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: MCRChick4life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE U CAN DO IT KICK WRITER'S BLOCK IN THE ASS!!!
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Title: dsf
Reviewed By: Hera [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 22:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
dfd
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Reviewed By: love_is_absolete_yet_we_need_it [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR! plz update soon! ^_^
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Title: You need a beta reader...
Reviewed By: Aiko Fujiwara On: February 15, 2006 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's definitely got good content, and major kudos for an original plot line... Or rather more importantly, one that hasn't been done before. I see a lot of potential, and a lot of good idea... But the grammar is lacking... I suggest a beta-reader. Normally I'd offer to do it myself, but I'm swamped. Keep up the good stuff!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: December 15, 2005 10:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I just read the first chapter of your story. Not bad, but there were a few wrong words. The well is a "portal" to the future not a "porter". "Brote" is really spelled "brought". And I'm sure Kagome had a "small" trail of blood, not a "smell" trail. It is little things like this that can almost ruin a story. However, since I like the plot of this story I will keep reading it.
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