Title: Inuyasha's wife:D (i can dream, cant i? lol) Reviewed By: Kagomestar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 19:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10 Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review: um..... well, wat can i say? its not the best one-shot story ive read but its good all the same. i think you need some help wit your editing... then maybe it'll b better. also, i dont get the part about how sex is suppose ot make inuyasha n miroku pay.... oh well.... um... yea...wow. ok, it needs work... ALOT........
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