| "My Lover's War" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Japan_86 On: January 04, 2008 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good from most of the fanfics that I have read. When I read about a live action Samurai Champloo being included at first it put a smile onto my face. However, those that do not know the reference might not enjoy it as much without like a mention in the summary. One thing that bugs me other than poor grammar in fanfics is the author taking the characters out of their personality restrictions. I lost count how many times with the main character who is all touch is portrayed as a whimpy crybaby. After reading the first manga of this series I can tell that it is a difficult one to write a fan fiction for. However, Sakuya does not have a Mazda but a Ferrari.
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Reviewed By: mischievous angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! The fight scene was interesting and well written.
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Reviewed By: Sensual-Phrase On: May 13, 2007 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will you please make other chapters? i would really enjoy reasding more of this!!!! Alexa
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Title: WoW
Reviewed By: Kaitybell On: June 16, 2006 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that was awesome! You are really good and it would be so cool if you could add more to it. I don't know what but it wouyld be cool.
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Chibi Silver Neko On: April 10, 2006 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Samurai Champloo? How nice! I busted out laughing and my friends all stared at me. That was well written. Although I'm not a samurai champloo fan, but i must say, that was awesome! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Empress Night Star On: March 01, 2006 20:32 CST
Comment/Review:
That was funny! It's been awhile since I read a good comedy/action fic. You should post this in the Sensual Phase section of this site. You think you can write an A/S lemon? There are none in the Sensual Phase section.
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