| "The Tao of Osaka-sensei" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Osaka grown-up
Reviewed By: oCARINA DUDE On: January 10, 2007 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. Simply amazing. I have to say that I was sad after watching episode 26 of Azumanga Daioh! But this... this is one of the best Azumanga Daioh fanfics I've ever had the pleasure of reading. The candydish part was disturbing, but funny none the less. You somehow managed to make a more mature Osaka while maintaining her essence. Thank you so much. My favorite Azumanga character lives again.
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Reviewed By: El Grey Gato On: March 16, 2006 08:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems like a long time since I saw a draft of chapter 1 posted on the FFML, and it makes me a little bit happy to know that it's still ongoing. I love this story. The characters are spot-on without being cruel (not even to Kimura, so props on that - I doubt I would've been able to get past the creep-out stage in real life), and the sense of light-hearted humor is maintained throughout. Since those are the basic two elements needed to make an Azumanga Daioh fanfic work, I pronounce these three chapters - and, hopefully, the next few (winkwink, nudgenudge) - a success. Congratulations! Only you and DB Sommer have achieved such great success in my book. ^_^
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Reviewed By: triviatrap1982 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 01:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, this is a very funny story! What I'd like to know is if Osaka would end up doing sometihng that would throw Yukari over the edge (again). Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to your next chapter in this series.
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Title: The Tao of Osaka-sensei
Reviewed By: ATX On: February 02, 2006 06:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fanfic - I agree with the other reviewers, you brought out the character's personalities perfectly. I never saw Kimura in that light before...
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Reviewed By: Cardcaptor_RLH85 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 01:07 CST
Comment/Review:
I generally withhold rating fics until they're done, but commenting is fair game ^_^ So, far I've really liked what you've done with the characters. I hope that you continue this fic at least to the point where we see the original students' 5-year class renunion. I would be very interested in your view of the rest of the characters after they've 'grown-up' a bit more.
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Title: The Tao of Osaka-sensei
Reviewed By: Blazing Sky On: January 08, 2006 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading your fan fic, and I must say your interpertation of a slightly older Osaka is simply great, Osaka and Chio were my favorite characters out of the series. I am happy to see how well you landed Osaka's personaltiy with a dash of maturity. I do hope you finish this fic in the near future.
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Reviewed By: KoroshiyaZwei [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fun and amusing read. You captured the characters quite well, especially Osaka and Mr. Kimura despite the changes they're going through. Some spelling and grammar errors were present, but it didn't detract from the overall readability of your story. I insist you continue, you could have a decent series on your hands if you put your heart into it.
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