Reviewed By: Norlan4u [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 04:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hm so here i am writing another review never done many but seeing that you havent gotten at least 1 i think its not too much for me to do wellllll what to say lets make it 3 points ^^ 1. the idea is great i have been reading many kyuubi centric fics but kyuubi mostly been either still imprisoned or merged so its more a 11 out of 10 2. style of writing just got a 7 of 10 because the PoV gets a bit confusing at some times even with it beeing a great way to tell a story when iruka henged into naruto ^^ 3. and last but not least im not rating Spelling and grammar cause as you can see im an teachers nightmare when it comes to the written word and dont feel like judging others in thinks i cant do myself so telling that youre much better then i am is not really much but overall great story ^^ P.S There is just 1 thing this story needs P.P.S. UPDATES ^^
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