| "Eye of the Beholder" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: KawaiiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 14:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is good, you should def continue
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hellyes, the fight scene was good, it kicked ass!
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Title: YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AN UPDATE, YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG I WAITED!?!?!?!?! THIS STORY KICKS SO MUCH ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG, SO MUCH ANGST AND DRAMA, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THIS STORY RULES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I coud put hundreds 'cross the board I would! Two chapters that quick, UBER-SWEETNESS!!!! Me lovey fanficcy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Ch9
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 10:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O......holy ************** crap dude. Wow....I am....at a complete loss for words right now. Ed got pissed, that's all I'm thinking. Story pwns, and I can't WAIT for the next update! Ja Ne!
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Title: Ch8
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Near the end of ch8 is figgen hi-larious! Loved it! And finally an update! YES!!! A relationship between Ed and Xandyr is going to develop? Sweet! I kinda thought Ariyca was a bit of a..witch personnally (and politely ^^). Xandyr is SOOOOOO much cooler. Heheh....shaving....I'm going to imagine Ed shaving right now...........huh. Kickass story! Keep it up!
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Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap...Ed left Ariyca AND tried to commit suicide. I wonder if he survives his little swim. (Don't do it Edo-kun, you're to cool to try to kill yourself! We love you! And I love you more than all the other fangirls because they suck! 'Cept my BF, but that's a different story....)Story os awesome BTW. oh and, that Zaine dude sounds like a hottie........sweeeeeeeeet. ^__________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________^
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1ST off, this is very deep, but its sooooooooo cool! The lemon was nice too........... 2ND of all, HanyouAlchemist says 'You're Welcome' for the reviews! ^-^ There should be more reviews though, and not just from me, cuz the story rocks! And I also noticed, Ed's hair is waist long now.......*giggles evilly*.....smexy........... ... and THAT'S why everyone calls me crazy. Honestly, I talk to my friends about Ed, like Hughes talked about his daughter. And they all hate me for it, Mwahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Uh...anyway......keep up the good work!
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Title: awesome! (still)
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'K, everyone here is missin' out. This story kicks ass! Come read this, people! *sigh* No one listens to HanyouAlchemist...... Why? They all think I'm crazy............ Which I am, but that's not the point! Love your story!
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Title: w00t!
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An update, YAY! (really love the story!)
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Title: LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: HanyouAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, this is an AWESOME story. I love it! I hope you bring Al back though, he's such a sweetie! I love him! *glomps Al* Keep up the good work!
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