| "Desperation" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: The Key Holder
Reviewed By: WitchHunter On: January 31, 2007 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though it was short I felt that if shampoo felt like she had to take Ranma against his will then this would be how it would happen. You didnt sugar coat it like I expected. The writing was good, I'd like to see a next ch about the consequences moral and physical of her actions.
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Title: mmmm
Reviewed By: ho-iatneh On: November 12, 2005 17:30 CST
Comment/Review:
wee! dark fics...not much female-male rape fics...so keep on going if u get flamed...well get a fire extinguisher...just keep on working till they shut the hell up..its all goood...as long as u got satisified reader...i.e. me and other ppl
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: Miyu_Starfighter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 19:37 CST
Comment/Review:
That Rocked! More for me please!
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
intresting fic here what will ranma do when he gets free? or will he get free?
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