Title: Great! Reviewed By: Scooda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 10:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I like it! I just think that maybe you should do a ABC check before you upload the stories, and it would also help to get a beta-tester as well. It's off to a good start, and I think that you did very well introducing the characters and such. Oh, and another matter. Did you purposely make this mistake? 'found = ofund'
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