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| "An Unexpected Incident" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: PrincessOfTheUnderworld On: July 16, 2007 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I really like this story and i read on the satus that it's a work in progress so i wonder if you could continue it because it's very good and i've been waiting for quite a few years to see if you would update but you didn't so now i'm reveiwing to see if you could maybe continue. If you don't want to that's fine but i want you to know that this is a really great fic and i bet that lots of people would really like you to update as well so anyways that all i'm going to say and maybe you will update some time Ja ne
| Title: love this fic
Reviewed By: Ai On: January 14, 2006 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dont know why but since i saw Arjuna i have a little crush on Chrys.You know what i mean dont you. I really love this pairing too and since there are not really many Arjuna fanfics i say:Go on and write more now i am really curios. Thats all. Thanks
| Title: love this fic
Reviewed By: Ai On: January 14, 2006 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dont know why but since i saw Arjuna i have a little crush on Chrys.You know what i mean dont you. I really love this pairing too and since there are not really many Arjuna fanfics i say:Go on and write more now i am really curios. Thats all. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Meowing On: January 14, 2006 00:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I say continue.
| Title: Another CxC 'Shipper
Reviewed By: AisekiAnrui On: January 03, 2006 15:35 CST
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Yes, yes, yes! Another Arjuna fan! You have no idea how happy I am. Not only are you a fellow fan, but you're also a CxC 'shipper! Yes! Chris and Cindy are one of my favorite pairings, and I love these two characters to death. I know two other Arjuna fans, but neither of them are rabid CxC shippers like I am, so I'm glad I found another one like me. I adore this fic, and though I don't have a MediaMiner account (FF.net is more my style), this is getting bookmarked. Good job, write more, aned upload more Arjuna stories! Also, if you feel like talking, you can email me at aiseki_anrui@bluebottle.com . I'd be interested in talking about your personal take on the dynamics of CxC.
| Title: very good
Reviewed By: Irishdancer On: January 03, 2006 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found the story to be very good. Do go on like this, I am really curious and would like to see more since Arjuna stories are really rare gems! ;o) I, too, write Arjuna fanfics that are up on fanfiction.net and it's nice to see that there are others out there. Ja ne! Irishdancer
| Reviewed By: nonny for Anonymous On: November 07, 2005 02:17 CST
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You started out really well; it was very descriptive, fun to read, and easy to picture myself in the story. However, towards the middle, you started to do what my friend refers to as "screen-writing," where there is more dialogue and "script" than there is description. That isn't really a bad thing (and I have a problem writing like that, too), but it is something you might want to work on. I really enjoyed your concept, as well. Chris and Cindy seemed very in character. If you have more Chris/Cindy fics, I think you should post them, because I'd enjoy reading them. Cheers! - nonny for Anonymous
| Title: Hi
Reviewed By: kat199 On: October 31, 2005 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definetly think you should comtinue this story. : )
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