| "Tyrant's Lament" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Saeri Jenn On: April 24, 2010 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do adore how you are always able to give characters a psychological depth that you don't really see in the original works especially the Dragon Ball franchise the focus mainly on a whole physical realm of being with fights and power levels. Now for this piece its self: I've got to say it was interesting to read to say the least. Stumbled across this by per chance as I was looking at some of your other works. Great job disecting Frieza's character psyche. Very believable to the point it seems as if a you've taken the stance of a criminal profiler. And a fantastic job with the craftsmanship behind the story which makes it very pleasurable to read. Speaking of your proofing skills here and the ability you have to make the work nearly flawless of errors. It's wonderful to find pieces like this. Now off to snoop through your other works! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the characterization of Frieza is superb, you describe so well his disturbed mind. This is a great fanfic and I want to say that I love your style of writing, you know very well how to touch us with your great stories.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 09:39 CST
Comment/Review:
You know I love the man... Frieza that is. This was a dark and delicious characterization. I'm going to read it again and think of something less spacey to write you. Pieces like this one deserve thoughtful feedback. This is my favorite one-shot of yours, though.
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 12:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay. I guessing here. It's Freiza isn't it? It's the first fic that I've ever read that tells things from his point of view, and i liked it. I mean, we all knew that he was born crazy and bruthless. But if he was raised the right way, maybe he would have turned out just a little better. I mean, I hate him.. come on, every fan of Vegeta must hate Freiza. Who knows what that bastart did to Vegeta, when The Oh So Mighty Prince was a slave to him.. I'm gonna stop writing. It's gibberish anyway. argh. byebye keep it up
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