| "Storm Warning-Part 1" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: oramashumi On: May 25, 2008 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is the only story that I've ever read on this site that I believe deserves the full 10. Though there may be some others that I've just forgotten about.
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Reviewed By: BZLF On: November 20, 2006 03:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved reading your work on the Greyarchive. After ages and a good Google search I found your account here. How goes the next part, if you're still *hopefully* working on it?
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Title: Woo Hoo!!!
Reviewed By: SirOverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellant peice of work. Top notch... now that Ive read part 1 i am going to part two for sure
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Reviewed By: blue7 On: November 07, 2005 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uggghhhh......more self deluded,SI look how impressive I could be if only the world was completely different crapola. Overall,the writing style is clean,but flat from an emotive veiw.
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Title: A sweet fic
Reviewed By: Kargan301 On: November 02, 2005 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is a sold 10 all the way across. You have done much to capture a good sense of the pokeworld and you have given your chracters a sold personalty to each of them. Keep up the good work. Kargan303
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Reviewed By: NullFactor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 20:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I think your point about Tank is quite valid and it's something I've tried to deal with somewhat in the second part of Storm Warning (also posted on this site). Please give it a read and let me know what you think. At the moment I'm mostly concentrating on my Ranma 1/2 story, but I'm definitely still plugging away at Storm Warning too, so hopefully I can put up some new chapters in the next couple of weeks or so. Null Factor
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: thaltom On: October 30, 2005 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work on this fic. I like the story, the cross overs, and the pokegirl world in general. The only complaint I have is the lack of any fault in the main character Tank. He's strong, generally smart, a perfect leader from the get-go, a perfect lover without any practice, and sometimes it seems that he could take care of himself without pokegirls at all. That makes him seem kind of unrealistic and inhuman. I like the story, no, I love it, the Rating speaks volumes because I normally don't judge that high. Just work on Tank a bit and its 10s across the board.
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