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| "spanked?" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: *sigh*
Reviewed By: Arsenic_Dimentia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ending with Ritsuka was so nice! =) And whew, those spanking scenes were tough, but I managed to read them. It made me shiver when I read that they were going to use ginger on him!! T-T; The only thing that I would say isn't very good was the constant *WHACK!*s. They were actually really annoying. ^^; I recommend that you try to describe the spanking more often so you'll have a better sense of reality; also, your story will still be just as long (I noticed you seemed really proud of the length). Other than that, though, this story was near perfect!! Awesome job!! XD
| Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 21:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Yea, so I basically skipped the spanking parts with lots of *WHACKS* and stuff, because it's just too painful to read =( But I liked the ending, I mean where Ritsuka showed up and saved Soubi! They're such a great couple! I just feel horrible that Soubi got... spanked T__T Some real masochists out there.... *shiver*
| Reviewed By: Thankies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 16:49 CDT
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Ritsuka to the rescue! That was great. I can't believe Soubi would do that to Seimei, though! That was screaming for trouble! And bringing him to Ritsu... yikes. Poor Soubi. But you had my laughing out loud at this part... Seimei dawned a wicked look and knelt by Soubi. *WHACK* Seimei took a deep breath and stated, "Soubi, I'm not doing the because I'm cruel or get some type of amusement from this. I'm doing this as punishment, and only to help you become a better person." They were so sadistic... and ginger root! Yikes. So... have they all learned their lessons now? ;)
| Reviewed By: Lina Inverse The Dramata [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written, not my cup of tea, but well Written nonetheless (open reader, even if I don't agree with some things) I can only hope Seimei wasn't that much of a bastard in the manga, he seemed very sweet from what I've read in the first book... well to his bro. He seemed a bit diff from the brief glance between him and Soubi. People have been writing some pretty dark stuff about loveless, darker then even the manga seems... hope its not a preview of things to come, that'd be creepy.
| Reviewed By: Dead_ACPF [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Semie is evil! Poor Soubi!!!!!!!! Oh well at least he is happy when Ritsuka says he'll never spank him. I love Ritsuka and Soubi as a couple!
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