Reviewed By: Almighty Neko-chan On: November 03, 2005 22:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: Well...to be completely honest, it's kind of sketchy. Numerous spelling and grammar mistakes, as well as questionable transitions, but it's nothing that can't be fixed. It seems you could use a beta reader. If you'd like, I could beta read for you. Don't worry, I wouldn't change your story or anything. I'd just help you with the small things like spelling, grammar, and puncuation. You can contact me at TendershippingFanatic@gmail.com (yes, I know...shows why I read this story, huh?) I hope you consider! ^^ ~Almighty Neko-chan~
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