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| "One Eight 0 Four" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Agreed
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 03:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree that this was a well thought out story and your beta's have done a fabulous job on the spelling and grammer errors. It is such a fasinating story as well and I want to say thank you for sharing it with others ^ ^ It's very original and the plot is great. Your description was well written too. Keep it up ^.^
| Title: Good Story
Reviewed By: Niobe Jones [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 08:30 CST
Comment/Review:
You get to put up with my misspellings and crappy grammar in this review. Your betas did a good job because the only thing I noticed were comma placements around names. You incorpoorated the required elelments like the broken chair uniquely and well into your story. Nina was a neat character, I just wish we got to know her, jon and roman a bit better. Good job.
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