|
| "Saiyajin Princess-- Vega's life story" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Dani/ancients On: July 18, 2002 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have heard better stories from a wall. No affence but I have a better storie to tell. I didn't like it because i didn't understand most of it. Did u mean "KIng Vegeta" Prince Vegeta's father or Prince Vegeta himself? | Reviewed By: KawaiiMoonAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very good. And yes, same here, don't take the rating too harshly, perfection is still yet to be found. Please keep updating/writing this story, I want to know what happens! If you don't then... um... can you get back to me on that? Anyways. Go Vega! A rather likeable character in my opinion. ^o^v | Reviewed By: S.D.I. [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2002 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Made a mistake on my last review, I've noticed a fair number of mistakes, spelling errors and inconsistancies. Still, a lot better than most fanfics. | Reviewed By: S.D.I. [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2002 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, usually I consider 80% of all author-created-characters a scourge of fanfiction, I find this neat. No actual DBZ characters to interact with/upstage or whatever.
Vega, while 'miss amazing' is actually rather likeable, showing traits that make her very believably directly related to Vegeta.
I rather dislike the choice of the name John, being so...blah-zay, but he's a bit cool in a way too.
Overall very nice work with developing character. The plot...is...hmm, rather unexciting maybe but it seems to fit. Nice job.
Don't take the rating too badly, I personally hate to award 'perfect' scores though it was very tempting here. | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
|
|
