| "Saiyajin Princess-- Vega's life story" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! I'm loving this story already. This has real potential. When I saw your story it lookeed familar to me. ANd I remeber where I saw the name Vege before. When I first started watching DBZ I was surfing some sites for info on it and I can across a site with a fanfic about a character named Vega. I don't know if its the same as your story but it had pictures of her. Anyway, this is a very intresting story. I hope you update soon ^_^ I love it and I give it two tails up so far! ~_^
-SaiyanBeauty (jademoonstar@aol.com) |
Reviewed By: Jako On: July 06, 2003 14:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeh hi. Same here, I saw TWELVE chapters here, and now they just disappeared! WTF??? Please bring them back soon! |
Reviewed By: King Cell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 13:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
my e-mail is shigeruyamauchi@aol.com
or stealthninja005@aol.com
I WANNA SEE THEM TOO,BRING THEM BACK |
Reviewed By: Falconeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story once before and there were at least twelve chapters then. Could you please explain what happened? I really liked it. Berleransom@aol.com |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 03:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry! I meant to say that it took me to the hypermart place, but said that the page I was looking for wasn't there. |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 03:41 CST
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I guess the page http://sarahfanfics.hypermart.net/vstories.html doesn't exist. It took me to some place called hypermart marketplace instead. *sigh* Oh, well. |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 03:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. I am going to go to your site and read the other Vega stories. She sounds like a character I'll enjoy. :) |
Reviewed By: DarkMagic On: December 05, 2002 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I enjoyed it. I hope to see the finishing soon. |
Reviewed By: Jess124 On: November 17, 2002 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the name you gave to Vegeta's sister! Your story's not perfect, but I gotta hand it to you , good job! I never thought of anyone writing a storyu about Vegeta having a sister. Hurry up with the updates! |
Reviewed By: Teari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 03:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sigh* What I wanted to say didn't come up right. ^^: What I mean is that there are words in the greater than/less than arrows, and they do not make any sense in the sentances that they are in. |
Reviewed By: Teari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 02:59 CDT
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It's not a bad story; but there are a lot of words in , with the /i after them that make sentences not make any sense. |
Reviewed By: siefire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 11:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
....um.......not bad. But seen this kind of thing before in alot of fanfics.
Your awesome in making fics though! |
Reviewed By: KawaiiMoonAngel On: September 09, 2002 22:39 CDT
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Ok, so i was too lazy to sign in. But n e ways... wut happened to the rest of the story?! i thought there were like... 15 chapters or something! I came back to check if there were updates... and they were gone!!! O.O I think I'm having a heart attack! gehegeuahgeghe. cough cough, alright alright im done. Please bring back those chapters and update new ones! |
Reviewed By: jewelsunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2002 10:41 CDT
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hey! what happened to the stories? I was just reading the big breakup! wwwhhhhaaa! and john and vega were about to get into another fight... oops.. did i give away the story? uh... well u write really good and u need to put the chapters back up!!! |
Reviewed By: Loth Quendi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, despite what some of the others think, I thought this was a very original idea, with likable characters, and I really hope you continue it. Awesome job! |
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