| "Wings of Light and Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 00:15 CST
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me like, me like, but is this during the war or after it? I'm confused since they don't seem to have the Gundams anymore but the experiment was done in the spirit of war.... And why was there like a year gap?
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh oh my I love this fic so far I can not wait for the next chapter please update when you can.
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Title: oh, good, and update!
Reviewed By: me On: July 21, 2006 05:42 CDT
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i think this is an interesting idea, i like the boys with wings. i am eager to see where you will go with it however - you may want to be cautious of redundancy. you tend to repeat the same thing from various points of view in almost the exact same phrasing - for example, we are told that heero moved his wings during his sleep, and then wufei observes heero moved his wings during his sleep, and then quatre comes in and wufei tells him heero moved his wings in his sleep, and then quatre reports it to sally etc. i hope that helps i'd like to see more chapters soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Akennea Stone On: July 20, 2006 10:11 CDT
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Good, original. Keep up the good work, and keep writing!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 23:34 CST
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hmm this is interesting, hope u continue.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 10:59 CST
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More!!! this is original in a way ya know. i like it. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Lupe On: March 01, 2006 09:54 CST
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Interesting story. Kinda a new take on an old idea. Every time you use the word catheter, I can't help but laugh. An IV goes into your hand. A catheter goes...elsewhere. lol. It's an important distinction should you ever work in a hospital.
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Reviewed By: urshurak On: March 01, 2006 03:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting plot, well written; I'm waiting for more ;-))
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Reviewed By: wizard116 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 20:37 CST
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in-ter-es-ting. it's a good start and i can't wait to see what else you have planed.
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Reviewed By: Niere [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 17:32 CST
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Hmmm, interesting. I'm not only interested in finding out 'why' this was done to our boys, but what they will do with the new wings. (I wonder if they will fit in the cockpit of their gundams now. Also, finding clothes to fit over the wings will be difficult)
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