| "Go Home Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: A-ha!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: November 12, 2005 14:20 CST
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I knew they were the same person...sort of. Thanks for the double chaps. Can't wait to see Kikyou die...yeah. That's the ticket.
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Title: Nicely Done!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 06:05 CST
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I just took the morning off to read this. Basically, I agree that everyone is a bit ooc, but that doesn't make it a bad fic & being ooc doesn't make it any less of a InuYasha fiction IMO. Who wants to see the same character played the same way over and over and OVER? Big ups for variety. I will say that Kagome is a baka and mama H is a bitch :snort:. But the fact that you dared for them to be different is a plus. The only thing I wish you'd do is give some detail on the lemons. I'm completely hentai & lemons are a must ^_^ Otherwise, it's a good story. Why do I get the feeling Aiko & Kagome are the same person or something close? :Raises brow: And was that really Sess-poo or Shippo?
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Reviewed By: YoukaiInuSlave On: November 09, 2005 22:45 CST
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Everyone is so out of character, especially Kagome's mom. Alternative Universe doesn't mean you get to change the characters' personalities, it just means they are in a different setting. All the characters are out of character here...
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Reviewed By: Elixir of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, I really like how you portrayed Kagome's mom in the last chapter. It was funny seeing Mama Higurashi lay down the law on Inuyasha and you're right, any good mother in her situation would be worried about her daughter and probably act the same way. The whole Ian bit with Kagome's friend and the "man with axe in skull" had me laughing so hard. I love the way you weave angst and humor throughout the story, keeping the reader interested the entire time. And the morning after scene between Inu and Kag's just captured their personalities and reactions perfectly! Hope you update soon. I'm loving this story.
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Reviewed By: MWU2626 On: November 07, 2005 15:07 CST
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This is great so far, love the humor and the writing is great. Will update again when I am finished. I am excited to see what happens in the end!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl (nli) On: November 04, 2005 16:33 CST
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good chappie 'n' stuffs, update again soon please
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl *nli* On: November 03, 2005 16:00 CST
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slightly fluffy stuffs ^^ at least he still cares. Update again soon please
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl (nli) On: November 02, 2005 18:38 CST
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update again soon please
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Reviewed By: darkness_of_the_night [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 12:35 CST
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i really like your story so far! so please update asap!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 22:11 CST
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awww, well...please update again soon ^^
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Reviewed By: InuKagFanAllTheWay On: October 31, 2005 09:50 CST
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Hello? Can we say 'mary sue'? Do you live in Georgia and is your nickname Boog?
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Reviewed By: bbbeleana On: October 30, 2005 14:30 CST
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Hmmm... Interesting start. I am looking forward to read more of your story, about naraku`s demish, the reasons for leaving everything behind etc. Hope to see ya soon, bbbeleana
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Reviewed By: This is an original disquised as an Inuyasha AU On: October 30, 2005 12:34 CST
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This story is obviously an original story that you are disquising as and Inuyasha story. Kagome and her mother are completely out of character. I can't see why you labeled this as a continuation. The only things remotely connected to the Inuyasha series are the names you are using. Don't you have the guts to let your original story stand on its own? Why are you marginally hiding it behind the Inuyasha name?
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Reviewed By: Amaria(not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 11:58 CST
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That was really good, you've got a good plot going. I'm looking forward to the rest, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 11:13 CST
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this looks really good. Update again soon please. it took me a half hour to write this review, kina sad....I had nuts and am now doped up on benadryll. ^^
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