| "To fulfill your destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Destiny
Reviewed By: Dacl73 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Do I believe in Destiny? That answer is much like yours, yes and no. I believe that people are destined to make certain choices, however the out come of those choices are up to the person making them. For Example take Peter Parker/Spider-man. I believe that he was destined to get his powers and destined to see the robbery, however he had a choice to stop it or to do nothing and he choose to do nothing. That choice cost him his uncle and set the destiny of the rest of his life, being Spider-man and a masked protector of the Innocent. Now my next example is from the MC2 line, May "Mayday" Parker aka Spider-girl, the daughter of Peter Parker (the now retired Spider-man" and Marry Jane Parker. She inherited her father's powers and his sense of responsibility. However Mayday was given more choice in her Destiny then her father had. She could have obayed her parents at the start and not become Spider-girl, but she did. Or when her powers disappeared she could have stop being Spider-girl then, but she didn't and because of being Spider-girl she regained her powers. That second choice is when she fixed her Destiny to being Spider-girl. She now has no choice but to be Spider-girl until such time has she loses the ability to do so (like her father lost his leg and stopped being Spider-man) Does this make sense to you? My brother doesn't understand this so I wanted to make so you all do.
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!! You have me laughing at all the missed oppurtunites and the inner dialoge of some of the characters. Yet you still have a deeper story line. I like your story please please keep writing, don't stop!!!!!:)
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Angel On: July 31, 2003 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
although i find ur story interesting in plots and schemes. Yet ur style of writing are not complete. u need to work on ur vocabulary, and definition. U need more work with the how u put words together. a lot of spelling and grammar mistake;the way u write is to simple but complex. enjoyment is very sastifaction. |
Reviewed By: NightAngel On: October 14, 2002 03:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
The author here!I'm really sorry!But I won't be able to update here on mediaminer, so plese go to www.fanfiction.net ! Thank you so mush! |
Reviewed By: han On: May 28, 2002 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
my sister's name is miriam so i like this fic already. it's really good. |
Reviewed By: Cherry 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2002 05:33 CST
Comment/Review:
kueeeeeeeeeelllllllll!!! [ok i no i'm gettin hypa] but diz fic iz gr88888888 |
