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| "Poke Walk" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Title: Shitty Story
Reviewed By: thehoboking [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2011 02:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like some of the ideas in your story but most of it is pure crap...alot of parts in your story don't really make sense to me such as this quote "Did you stake him to the ground and subject him to puns?" Cyber At-Muff asked. "NO, we locked him in a room and played 'It's a Small World' on continuous loop. Now, shall we get back to business?" WTF does that actually mean...i just stopped reading after that part... | Reviewed By: KelvinsChoice [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 09:38 EDT
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First, thank you for your reviews and comments. I generally reply by e-mail, but I thought I'd better say that I do read and answer reviews. PCHeintz72 wrote: I meant to comment on one minor inconsistancy. The subject of chocolate seems to be handled oddly at points. Ritsuko used it as a point to Jeff early on, yet at another point in the story, Misato mentions never having heard of it, while others are present, and no one corrects her. And I know it was brought up elsewhere. In the first instance, Ritsuko is trying to get him to tame her, if he has to give her chocolate and flowers before hand, that's fine. Later, Misato is just messing with his head after he showed he doesn't really understand Pokegirls.
| Reviewed By: Moonkie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 18:38 EDT
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This is one of the best PokeGirl stories I've ever read. Top three without a doubt.
| Reviewed By: PCHeintz72 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 23:59 EST
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I meant to comment on one minor inconsistancy. The subject of chocolate seems to be handled oddly at points. Ritsuko used it as a point to Jeff early on, yet at another point in the story, Misato mentions never having heard of it, while others are present, and no one corrects her. And I know it was brought up elsewhere.
| Reviewed By: Deathguise [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 20:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, I'm really torn by this story. I absolutely love the personalities of the pokegirls, the story's twists, and the action scenes. Its an amazing read, and its fun to see the occasional familiar character from another anime. I havent read or even heard of the other crossover category, the non pokemon/tenchi one. The biggest thing about the stary that gnaws on me is the main character. I'm sure he is from the anime Im not familiar with, but all in all, he seems.. too perfect. Granted, he has a difficult past, but hes more or less set in every other category. He's young, but mature, knows how to fight in many styles, an excellent lover, intelligent, familiar with politics and psychology, kind to a fault, has the experiances of a cosmic being somehow being awakened in him, calm in every situation he's in, and he's a magic user to boot. Maybe I'm just being picky.. but it seems a little much. Especially with this new (legendary) girl he's going to be looking for. Dont get me wrong, I love the story, but its almost painful reading about the main person who's doing everything and managing it flawlessly.
| Reviewed By: PCHeintz72 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 19:22 EST
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Well, I've enjoyed reading this so far, in fact, read all of it twice within the last week. It is odd, I've read part of the main Sic Semper story and thought it good, but not really for me, yet side arcs by that author and this by you I find great reads. I was disappointed to see this latest update to chapter 8 was mearly an edit, and not a new chapter, but the corrections, as I noted in a binary compare I ran, while small, were well made. Look forward to more.
| Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Baran [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 02:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry i didn't take the time before to write a review. Only one word: Awesome. I was a little sceptical in the beginning. The famous Jeff from Sic Semper Morituri in the pokegirl world? After a few chapters, i was trapped. You're still one of my favourite authors. continue with the good work
| Reviewed By: Eliar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 07:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best and fullest fanfics Ive read only reason it doesnt have more reviews is the fact that u have to be a mediaminer member I believe keep it up!
| Title: I can't believe I'm the fist to review this!?!
Reviewed By: Squall AKA Leon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 10:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I can't get anything done because of you. This fic has me so captivated I wind-up reading it all day instead of working on my own fics. Thanks for the distration... BELIEVE IT! --Kid Loose AKA the Narutard.
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