| "Tomo's Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: jennjennr On: December 26, 2005 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this fic. actualy i kinda like it more than other stories with main characters. you deserve way more reviews this story recived. it was an awsome story no matter the characters. please write somemore i cannot wait you are a wonderful writter and i love all of the works of your's i have read
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Muneca2Sexy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the new chapters were Fantastic. I STIL wonder what Akasura looks( i hope she doesn't look like a short chubby guy, cause you said the dad looks like her and thats what he looks lik. Also what was that all about Kagome leaving the book behind is there a baby coming? im dieing to know please update.
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Title: Tomo's Girl
Reviewed By: Muneca2Sexy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved ur first story and this one but have u noticed you didn't describe Akasura. What does she look like? I love how she is so strong but still realistic it is a lot to cope with. please update soon.
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Title: Another great title
Reviewed By: rage2velvet (not signed in) On: November 16, 2005 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These last two chapters were terrific. I like the angst very much. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when Tomo makes his transition. Akasura is a tough girl but that's a load to cope with. Will this mortality issue and child issue be resolved? Will he be able to accept her love? I'm excited about reading more-
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Title: ab fab
Reviewed By: rage2velvet (not signed in) On: November 07, 2005 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm looking forward to more to come. I like this story very much. Every day life often inteferes w/our personal time on so many levels. Nothing to apologize for! :-)
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: rage2velvet (not signed in) On: November 02, 2005 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this. I think I'd better go back and finish reading the prequel to this story. I am really enthralled with this story. I like Tomo. He's sexy and bad! Good job! You should have more reviews than this
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Title: Mmmm Hmmm
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm dying for more. So update. Don't let me expire. Please.
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