| "The Ultimate Friendship: Vegeta and Pan- Frieza's Back Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: GoRgEoUs_GaL [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2002 02:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your fics Veggie-Trunks! You have a real good thing for writing! You should become a writer when you are older! I love the Ultimate Series Saga! They are one of the coolest sagas ever!!! The best Ultimate Series Saga is The Ultimate Friendship: Vegeta and Pan - Goku Saga! I love how you make Trunks and Pan hate each other but I think they really like each other. Are you making them like each other? My favourite couples are K/18,M/U(Marron and Uub),G/CC,V/B,B/G(Bra and Goten) and P/T(Pan and Trunks).I also love Tien and Lunch!! |
Reviewed By: Crystall On: March 24, 2002 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this fic!!! Can't wait for the next saga!!! |
Reviewed By: RubyRedDevil On: March 14, 2002 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its very funny and very interesting, your writing style is very unqie and very entertaing. You have also capture the Daddy's little girl relationship and the bond between pan and vegeta |
Reviewed By: asveethan On: March 11, 2002 09:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you e-mail or tell me when a chapter is up please.
veethan@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: vitha On: March 12, 2002 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, update it pls. i love your fic. i'd really enjoyed your fic.
hurry up.
plsssssssss..... |
Reviewed By: Cole On: February 14, 2002 18:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Update damn you UPDATE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: jean On: February 12, 2002 18:03 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a good fic. i luved all ur past sagas, they were so cute!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait till the next chapter comes! so hurry up! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: jeeeva On: February 07, 2002 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great. Coming good! Hurry up I can't wait. Hurry up with the pan and trunks are teenagers. I am sorry but i love your story. Also my family loves it too! |
Reviewed By: cat On: February 04, 2002 14:13 CST
Comment/Review:
interesting. but you really think that a storm would stop Goku and company? hurry up with the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: uh....... On: February 01, 2002 19:14 CST
Comment/Review:
hurry up wit the next chapter. the funny part was vegeta not training. especially wit goku around! |
Reviewed By: Hotohori4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2002 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,Veggie-Trunks!!
I see you started the next saga. Great!! I can't wait to for to hurry up and put out another chapter. But I really can't wait for you to get to the saga where Pan and Trunks are teenagers and fighting more intensely than ever!!
Also, I just read Was It Faith?, and you've got to update, update! It would be cool if you wrote a scene in the Ultimate sagas showing Vegeta being almost tender to Bulma like a scene from WIF?. Sort of like a teaser for all you're readers from you're other stories. Seriously, Update!! Sorry for this inconsistent review, I'm just a big fan!!
Lastly, I've reviewed your UFS-V&P saga before, but under another nickname,Hotohori4life. I just have a different MM handle!!!
Have a Great Day!! |
