| "If I were you" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Lee_chan On: May 03, 2002 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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awsome story! please finish it really soon! |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 14, 2002 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I like where this is going, please add more can't wait for chapter eight. Peace. |
Reviewed By: connie On: February 05, 2002 19:42 CST
Comment/Review:
i gove you 10's on everything but i'm too lazy to do it. i do so much enjoy their verbal battles, and it happens to be that you handled it really well. i congratulate you!!! and poor bulma and her ankle (makes me wonder why it doesn't hurt when they (cough)...do it. i love this story so keep up the great work! hope to read the next chapter soon!! |
Reviewed By: me!! On: February 05, 2002 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm...if i could give you higher ratings, i would!! this story made me so giddy, happy, sad, and mad at the same time. i would love to read the rest and soon, hint hint! so, mind typing faster? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 05, 2002 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG those 2 chaps were incredible, fantastic and "sinfully delicious". It was just beautiful the way you brought them together. Great job. Of couse Dr. Briefs had to ruin it with that lame breakfast. Write more soon. Peace |
Reviewed By: Firaga On: February 01, 2002 18:41 CST
Comment/Review:
wow! wow! thats all i can say! i gotta have more! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 01, 2002 03:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, love it!! Maybe I'm a sicko, but I do so enjoy their emotional battles. I can't wait for them to finally find each other. Write more soon!! |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: January 31, 2002 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT was really good! i hope you will contiue really soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: whee! On: January 31, 2002 09:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Very interesting...I must have more!!! Write more PLEEEZE! |
Reviewed By: Duo's Dame On: January 31, 2002 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, this was a riot! I always love V/B fanfics set away from the usual Capsule Corp./Western Capital settings. The interactions between V/B are quite believable EXCEPT for the Vegeta's-A-Virgin implications. I don't believe THAT for a minute! Otherwise keep up with a great story!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 31, 2002 03:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I'm sorry there were only 3 chaps. I like this fic and I hope you update soon. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2002 01:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice beggining! You write a whole lot better than me, I'll tell you that much@ I just happened to be uploading my stories and looked at the newest fanfics list and saw yours, which was between two of mine so decided to read it.
I know you could care less about hearing this but I just wanted to say it. Anywayz, keep up the good work! Peace!
Veggie-Trunks |
Reviewed By: Masume On: April 24, 2002 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was just TOO CUTE! absolutely adorable! i love the little details you put into your story, such as dr. brief'scooking and things like that. and the lemon was fantastically described. quite the imagination you've got! all in all, this was a great story, though i'm not sure if it's done yet. |
