| "Retribution" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: sooo cute!!
Reviewed By: furuba fan lover On: May 30, 2006 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!! it's soo romantic... kyo and tohru together. they deserve it. when are you going to contineu it?? i'm eager to find out what's gonna happen next. =P
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Reviewed By: Klove0511 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 23:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Way off canon at points, but your spoiler warning only went up to 116, so it's all good. I love Kyoru fluff. And even Kyo being a moron and breaking her heart. *sigh* I love your stories.
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Reviewed By: Kilee On: March 19, 2006 06:25 CST
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*sighs* You have the very special talent of making me want to cry and say "awww" at the same time. Great mix of fluff and angst.
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Reviewed By: DawnFire881 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 21:11 CST
Comment/Review:
ok I adore your stories, it's definitely official! You always seem to have just the right amount of angst and fluff in your stories and i love that! I loved this story too, I hope that you'll continue to write more of your awesome FB stories! ::hug::
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 17:06 CST
Comment/Review:
First off, I'd like to note that I'm not sucking up in anyway, shape, or form. It's obvious there was at least one beta helping on this fic, which makes the grammar and spelling flawless. One thing I did note and that did trouble me was that I have a very vauge image of these people. I know the girl has brown hair and I didn't find out about the cat ears until the last paragraph. It may be a wise move for readers not in tune with the series to give some slight descriptions on the characters. As for the plot, I'm a sucker for romance so I lapped the fluff up. There's nothing better than well written fluff. The plot is belivable and the characters seem to react realistically. Great Job and thanks for submitting to FFARG.
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Reviewed By: Kyoru Lover/ a kyoru tomboy On: November 30, 2005 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOOVED IT! I'M SUUUUUCH A KYORU FAN!!!! Im happy you put the mom in! No one ever does that anymore! Plz write more cuz its sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! You should be a writer! I give your story a 10 outta 10!
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Title: kyo-kun
Reviewed By: Fullma8712 On: November 27, 2005 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU MUST WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR ANOTHER ONE-SHOT OR SOMETHING!!!! AND IF YOU DO, PLEASE, I BEG OF YOU, TO MAKE IT A KYOXTOHRU!!!!!!! I ABSOLUTE LOVE THAT PAIRING!!!!!^-^ OH, AND IS IT TRUE THAT THEY KISSED IN THE MANGA? IF SO, WOO HOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shoomy2003 On: November 15, 2005 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! You sent this story to the Kyoru group (or was it Fruity group? I can't remember) and I just finally got around to reading it. It was absolutely wonderful! I wrote something similar (Place Just For Me on ff.net), but I like how you kept it a one-shot. I love your line from Yuki, "If I see Miss Honda heartbroken again..." oooo that was so Yuki! That was a wonderful story!!! Great job!
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Title: omfg
Reviewed By: Ritsu999 On: November 08, 2005 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg, i absolutely LOVED IT!!!!!!! it was soooo great!!!!!!! ^_^ lol, i absolutely love the Kyo/Tohru pairing, lol!!! u must write another furuba one-shot, or actual story or sumthin!!!! lol, loved it!! bye byes!
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Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: Sariyona [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm usually more of a Yuki/Tohru fan but this approach was unique and wonderful! I think you really showed Kyo's fear and anguish. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Be still my Kyou/Tohru fangirling heart
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 21:45 CST
Comment/Review:
*dreamy sigh* You gotta love the Kyou/Tohru moments. You've captured the essence of the characters perfectly down to the way Shigure annoys everyone's favorite cat. Finding good fan fiction for Furuba is rare so I'm very happy that you ventured into this fandom.
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