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| "From Me To You, And From Him To Me" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Lady Aqualyne (From AdultFanfiction.Net) On: November 07, 2005 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I really liked this story. This is the first review I have ever written on MediaMiner... I guess because you asked so sweetly for the review I just had to review it. I loved the way you wrote this story, your spelling overall was very good as well as your grammer. You have an original style of writing, light, and yet when needed you can put forth important emotions (like how Hiei felt about having to sleep with Leena) very well. The story has a light enjoyable feel to it, and yet you wonder still what's going to happen next. ::nods:: I liked that a lot about your story. What I liked the most though was the way you outlined the story, it doesn't seemed rushed and I like that about you. Keep up the great work and I look forward to your next chapter. Lady Aqualyne
| Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story, and I think you kept the characters in character, which I love in a story. I liked the pairings that you wrote, so I started to read, and now I'm excited for the next chapter. Please update soon! ^-^
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