| "A Fool's World" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 11:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I love how tragic you make Sango. It's brillant! Thanks for your review on "Lonely". I update every week but to answer your question about Ed being 20 yet being abused, you'll get the answer in the next chapter coming up. You're a great writer, too! :)
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Reviewed By: Kiki14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehehe i like reviewing myself! lol. actually im reviewing to say that i really have no idea how to work this thing so the chapter summary actually turned out as the story.... heh heh and also i want you all to know that i really like happy endings.
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Reviewed By: Kiki14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i love your story sooooooooo much! but it was so sad, i hope the real story isn't that sad! update soon!
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