| "Liquid Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: reader2 On: May 09, 2009 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very engaging story. Thanks for sharing. Hope you can return one day and give us another chapter. Loved the way you ended Chapter 4. Putting the action in the order you did worked well. It was best to have the chapter end exactly the way you did it. Putting the vocab list at the beginning would probably by helpful, so the reader wouldn't have to scroll down to find it.
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Reviewed By: gokigenyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I love this story! I can't wait to read more! your story is soo enjoyable and I'm so happy that you can put such a twist on this story! I especially like the Saito and Tokio interactions, so please keep on writing alright!!! XDDD
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Title: i love thgis so much
Reviewed By: calculatooo On: July 28, 2007 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this story! u are an amazibg weruter with amazing style and i cant wait to read what happens next ! update? pleas?
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Reviewed By: nobody at all On: June 01, 2006 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good Job! I really like your story. I didn't notice any glaring grammar mistakes and I like the story line although I did read a book one time that is vaugley similar to this --> The Watchers but your story has plenty of oiriginality to it. I really enjoyed it. Update Please! (soon)
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Reviewed By: mimitid On: February 21, 2006 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your fic! I have read all 4 chapters today and I am impatient for more. I was expecting a Saito/Tokio thing but your story is original, creative and engaging in its own right. I love the universe/world you have created. I'm not a writer, so I can't offer any creative critisism, but as a reader you have me hooked. I can't wait for the following chapters!
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