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| "Hollow" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: K_h_i_l0ver (nsi) On: January 14, 2006 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oOOh~ i agree with people. THIS iS HeLLa awesome! ^___________^ < 3 cant wait for the next chap c[=
| Reviewed By: anthony O On: November 07, 2005 17:40 CST
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Basicly, theres only one thing to say............HELLA AWSOME! lol. just keeps getting better, keep it up!
| Title: Meow...again
Reviewed By: Tidy On: November 07, 2005 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Job again lol keeep them coming ^_^ not sure what else to add rofl
| Reviewed By: Quenching the Fire On: November 06, 2005 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I love this story! It is SO FREAKING GOOD!! You know... this kind of reminds me of Helena for some reason, as a kid... because Helena is a songer and she could sing... and i could see her being pained and lonely too... especially because of the many things that has happened to her. This is SUCH A GOOD DETAILED Story... i REALLY liked how you described everything. I could TOTALLY feel this girls emotion... this is ABSOLUTELY GREAT and i REALLY wish i would be able to write this good. ^-^ Keep up the nice work!! -Quenching the Fire
| Title: Thank you - again
Reviewed By: --Anonymous-- On: November 05, 2005 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, this is amazing. I love it, you make it seem so... i don't know, more beautiful than I thought it to be -- my life that is. Of course you can publish it, you have my full consent, or however to put it. I love you, and thanks, its nice to hear, or rather, see someone say I'm not broken for once in my life. I love it, it really makes me smile, and cry, love at the same time. I love this a lot though, and I'm sure you'll get an award for this book, a lot of money, and everything. I love you a lot, dont ever forget that, and this story only makes me see even more how much i love you. You don't kill the story, like i did when i told it to you and it makes me proud, and honoured that you are writing this for me and that you love me and that i love you because it all seems so surreal but i still believe it whole-heartedly. I love you alot, this is amazing, and thank you for everything you've done for me. -- Once again... silent girl
| Reviewed By: anthony O On: November 05, 2005 13:04 CST
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i think this is a very good story. it uses alot of detailed description that make it a very good read. i also think that many people will be able to relate certin things to their own lives. for example, the whole description of the school bus and how it seems like hell. I can relate anyway... Overall, its a very good story and i think the person you are writing it for will like it as well.
| Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: --Anonymous-- On: November 05, 2005 00:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much. This really brought tears to my eyes. I don't know how you did it but you didnt make it sound like I was insane or anything, just troubled and misfortuned. I really appreciate this; for some reason having my story .. retold in a way just makes me feel greatly thought of. It really makes me wonder why we aren't together, why we can't see each other. I love you, and I always will. Thank you so much for being, and being there for me and doing this for me. I'm touched, really happy, heart-felt that you decided to do this. I love you --- Silent Girl from the Story.
| Title: Meow?
Reviewed By: Tidy On: November 05, 2005 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welll I think it is very well written i found it quite well done so far and hmmm hope to see more soon and umm meow ^_^
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