| "Pfft!" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Parietti15 On: January 26, 2005 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't read yaoi that much, but I found this kinda interesting at first so I read it. It was good, a lot better than many of the other fics I've read on this site. It maybe because I'm not really a fan of yaoi, but I found this fic just a bit repetitive. But don't let my rants discourage you, contiune to write, your style isn't bad.
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Title: hmmm...
Reviewed By: Sess_fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahem..... ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT ILOVEIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... get the pictutre? awesome story... i LOVE THE LEMONS!!! -Sess_fan
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Reviewed By: orphan-soul [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 20:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
strange. i didn't read it all.
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Reviewed By: Jenny-fer On: April 03, 2003 00:13 CST
Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAIIIIIIII!!!!!! TOTALLY AWESOME!!! ^____________^ LUV IT!!!!KIRA+SETSUNA FOREVER!!!!! *waves flag around* *is caps-lock happy* ^______^ Feel free to write more! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Azriel Dragonstar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 18:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I read this story before...I didn't have any taste for yaoi then...but now I do, and I could actually finish this. ^^ I think it's great. You have a real creative talent...I read your other stories too, and my opinion is exactly the same. Keep writing...you could be an author. Oh...great gallery, by the way. ^^ |
Reviewed By: ~Celina~ On: November 17, 2002 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Awsome fic! Ur a very talented writer! Could I possibly put this on my site? PWEESE? I love this fic! ^______________^
Email me at flamingpyro_69@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: ~Celina~ On: November 09, 2002 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your shamless groveling has worked! I am reviewing! look at me go! ^^ anyway, I liked this fic, it was a bit epic. Personnaly I think you should have split it up into chapters but it's your choice. Anyway, you captured the charecters quite well. Good Job! ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading the reviews that made me look like I couldn't read, I read the stinking fic again. Because I read it a second time over, I can say I get a little bit of the plot. But if I have to read the thing twice, it's not worth my time. It's a very nice fic with a fantastic plot, but not worth reading twice to get to it. |
Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 03:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think it was confusing. In fact I liked it a lot. Very well written and a good plot line. More than anything I loved the atmosphere you created, it was very realistic and that's something I rarely found in fanfics. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: sley On: May 27, 2002 08:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey,
i really like your story..especially the couple setsuna/kira *nods*
write more..wille you? |
Reviewed By: Element_Rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2002 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ignore squallsscar's review, not everybody's fic is enjoyed by everybody.BUT IT DID ME SO WRITE MORE!!!! I WANT TO KNOW MORE ABOUT SETSUNA AND KIRA!!!! *starts crying* ...anyway it's a great fic |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar On: February 08, 2002 10:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't like it because I found it comfusing. Not much made sense to me. |
Reviewed By: mara- On: February 02, 2002 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAh! I like this fic write more! I love Kira and Katou!!!!!!!!!!! write one of them!!!!!!!1 |
