| "There You'll Be" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2002 03:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Cant wait to see who Bulma will hook up with in the end. Goku is so sweet, but Bulma and Vegeta belong together...damn i am getting confused! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: April 01, 2002 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HEY! You updated! Awesome! I love this story! I am addicted to V?/B/K?'s. They are much more original (right now) than B/V's. I love your take on it. But I always say Vegeta and Bulma will get together. (sigh) Because I don't see Goku and Bulma, sorry. Nothing will ever make me see those two together. Like a Vegeta/ChiChi fic (shudder). Anyways, I'm off to work. See ya! BTW, I'm going to be updateing all fics today.... I'm 21 finally!! Write! (squeals) Your Vegeta is so good! |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2002 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write..
More..
Please?! ^_^
I have like, never seen a G/B fic before.. Wow. I feel so behind the times *'_'*
The Radditz-bashing is mean though.. I have a strong affinity to him ^_^ If you want to know why, read my story "Even the Ruthless Fall in Love"
Keep it up!! Pleaaaaase! More more more more!
~Majin Niņa~ (a.k.a. ErieDragon) |
Reviewed By: amanda On: March 04, 2002 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the fanfic! I hope you write more, because I'll be waiting for it! |
Reviewed By: ~*MeL*~ On: March 02, 2002 04:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! I like the way this is heading. But try to keep them in character so far done a great job of that! I don't like it when the go ooc. I LOVE V/B. Can't help it! I don't really like it when Bulma chooses Goku over Vegeta. But you fics huh! |
Reviewed By: karak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2002 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really dont like the fact that Bulma was raped, but love the fact that Vegeta made sure it wont happen agin and that he tried to heal her...very sweet. Please a V/B... i just cant get enough of them. |
Reviewed By: MistyDea On: February 11, 2002 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep, I came over to review some more!!! I actually would have given an 11 on enjoyment...
Because I LOVE G/B's yes i do. You girlies now i like V/B's too, but thee is just something about a good G/B
V/B G/B V/B G/B V/B G/B
I love triangles too! that is the best of Both worlds!!! lol
love ya Chante/Mandy
Misty |
Reviewed By: person On: February 08, 2002 20:49 CST
Comment/Review:
B/V!! B/V!!! GO B/V!!!! PLease!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: hey!!! On: February 08, 2002 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
i give you a ten on everything, but i'm too lazy to fill in the numbers...sorry. i really like the idea of b/g because it's different from the original boring b/v. something new ya know? i hope that it goes in that direction, but hey it's your fic. do what you want. just hurry up and keep me informed, k? my email is douj2284@yahoo.com. drop me a letter when you've updated k? |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 09:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I hope this is purtiful enough for you! I really like this fic. But I always wondered how Bulma could grow to love the leader of the people who killed her planet and people. Is this a V/B? Please, let it be a B/V. i don't like G(k)/B's. I just don't. Sorry, anyways. Can I reccomend more details? And that you continue with the story? I can't wait to read more. |
