| "A Treat for Dinner...A CEO for Dessert" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: OMG! OMG! OMG!
Reviewed By: RainbowPretear [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 15:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT'S HAWWWWT! Hey... I just noticed YaoiNova's review. Cool. He wrote to you. Anyways, I LOVE yaoi! (Gays are hot!) Hey, I liked your idea about... LOL (Laughs after reading the "high caliber" comment.) He's such a dork! Anyways (again), I liked the idea of having past enemies unite as "partners." YaoiNova's right: you ARE better than most of these other authors. Keep writing! (Preferably yaoi. 'o')
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Title: WOOOOW!
Reviewed By: YaoiNova [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was HOT! You're better than most other authors on this site. I can tell you're of high caliber as a writer. Just one thing: I'd suggest separating it into individual chapters. Other than that, you're GOOD! ^_^
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