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Reviewed By: dawn m [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 00:16 CST
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i hope there is more to this story somewhere it is really good and would like to read more
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Title: Up for Adoption?
Reviewed By: Fluffy of the SKT [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 17:16 CDT
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You've decided to give up on this fic? It's a brilliant idea and I've been hoping for an update. It's a shame. Great story so far; I'm sorry that it wont continue.
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: dawnmm On: May 04, 2007 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
wish there was more definately looked to be a favorable story is there more somewhere else
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a few of your other fics, so I was stoked to read this one. Suffice to say, I'm enjoying it thoroughly. However, I am absolutely certain that Ed and Al would NEVER allow themselves to be separated from each other, ESPECIALLY considering an orphanage is in no way dangerous and Ed would have no reason to fear for Al's safety. I think it's infinitely more likely that the two boys would have disappeared during the night and Mustang would have received a rather strongly worded resignation as well as Ed's silver pocketwatch in the mail some weeks later. There is also the fact that granny Pinako probably holds gaurdianship over the boys in the first place. I'm sorry if it seems like I'm trying to shoot your plot full of holes, but I really like your work and I'd hate for there to be unanswered questions at the end.
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Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 14:08 CDT
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November 2005?! That's the last time you updated?! I saw your other FMA fanfic, and so I decided to check this one out too. It's amazing! Could you keep at it? Please? I'm adding it to favorites in case you do. :3
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Reviewed By: perfect little girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
same thing Q_tip said only without all the o's awsome story man update soon! Please please please please please please!!!!!!! (if i'm annoying shut me up by updating)
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Reviewed By: Q_tip On: December 03, 2005 12:21 CST
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yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooozz!! that waz like soooo totally awesome! u need to like update asap!! think of stuff and post it man!!!!!!!!!! dduuuuuuddee update asap
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Title: blah
Reviewed By: picklesaregood On: November 27, 2005 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would love it if you would update this. I'm dying to see what happens next. Poor Ed. I thought that the other orphans would be a little annoying, because original characters in fanfictions usually are, but not this time. I was very impressed with the idea of it all and am very anxious to see how you remedy Ed's situation. The worst thing you could do at this point is to let this story be forgotten. It has SUCH potential. I know I'm not the only one who thinks so, the other readers are just to lazy to review. ^_^ Remember, don't rush it and keep them in character. When a story is rushed, the reader can always tell.
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Title: awesomeness
Reviewed By: Q_tip On: November 15, 2005 21:50 CST
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u hawt man u hawt!! keep up teh good wrk!!
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: foxgirl28 (lazy) On: November 07, 2005 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! please continue!
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Reviewed By: ShadowZero000 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 14:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Pretty good. Keep up the fine work!
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