| "Witness Protection Program" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: very good
Reviewed By: meiscrazy4_Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes yes continue it is a very interesting story better than any of the crap i write ^-^! And i really liked the different emotions that told me what was happening geez i have to try that then maybe my stories won't suck ha well anyway i enjoyed it and thats all that matters update soon pls can't wait
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 16:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting story... i like it... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Ayumi13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 05:54 CST
Comment/Review:
omg! you have to update soon i luvv it!!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: rin^^ On: July 05, 2006 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, that was nice, and very well writen. Your improving really fast!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!!! damn naraku he such a bastard. im glad souta is alive. i cant wait 2 see what happens next update soon
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Title: YAY! YAY!
Reviewed By: rin^^ On: June 01, 2006 07:13 CDT
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I'm sure glad souta survived. TNow Kagome wont be miserable alone. Damn Naraku, alwas escaping! Grrr. Ah well, awsoem update.
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Title: w00t
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kidof corny and it moved a bit too fast, but overal it was awsome! Very origional, well, At least i havent read anything like it. And I'me very happy to read it without getting dizzy. Lots of love to you! -Rin
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 05:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, I love a good character death. So how exactly does Kagome get out of this one eh? No, dont tell me (not like you would XD) I'll wait. Again, it was difficult to read because of the lack of spacing. Still, once I got over that it was fun. YAY!
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Title: Hiya!^^
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 06:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsomness!^^ thats totally awsome! YAY! I love it! This is one of the best fics I've read, though it could use a bit of editing. I shall be awaiting the next update! You sooooo rock!
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Reviewed By: Arasorki Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 17:44 CST
Comment/Review:
i love the story. please update soon
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Reviewed By: 23kags23 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good fan fic keep writting i want to see if kagome and souta meet inuyasha and shessy
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Title: Witness Protection Program
Reviewed By: blackrosevampire15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it please continue.^_^*
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was kewl plezz update
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Reviewed By: eIvin On: November 06, 2005 00:21 CST
Comment/Review:
ugg wtf i forgot that the box is different dementions then what show up on the review so ignore my example, but if u dont get what im saying most fics have the spacing so maybe u can get a format idea from them
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Reviewed By: eIvin On: November 06, 2005 00:19 CST
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this story definitley has good potential. the only suggestion i have is to have enters in between where they speak example "i dont want to leave" said inuyasha "i know but you have to" says his mother okay so its corny dialogue but u get the point anyway keep updating :)
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