| "Not Now, Not Ever" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
| Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 ] |
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH!!!! *hefting a large trout wearing a safety helmet* You said you were going to post both parts. Where's the rest? PLEASE??????
|
Reviewed By: mm-c On: November 21, 2005 23:03 CST
Comment/Review:
ok i know you said you were goin to torment him, but you tortured my yotan...how could you??? you better update soon and rescue him!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
It is NOT too soon to start nagging for another chapter. Okay, everyone else can nag, I'll just be the evil witch I am and DEMAND the next one. Hehehe. Love it. Hmmm.
|
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 19:01 CST
Comment/Review:
oh, god, you do that so well!! Overwhelming need to knock their heads together growing... But Villa Weiss will do the trick. I have a lot of faith in Villa Weiss. ;) Is it too soon to start nagging for another chapter?
|
Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 17:11 CST
Comment/Review:
One word. Delicious.
|
Reviewed By: mm-c On: November 12, 2005 17:07 CST
Comment/Review:
needless to say MM.org refused to show me an update...anyway love aya's possessiveness now if only he would get around to actually telling yohji *sigh*. as always update soon
|
Reviewed By: potatofreak [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
"remembering that he was angry, he glared for good measure" LOL aya is so CUTE!!! but POOR YOHJI!!! plz write more ;)
|
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 22:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Brain-dead but still loving this...God I hate Mondays. But this is a bright spot in my day, thanks!
|
Reviewed By: mm-chan On: November 07, 2005 20:54 CST
Comment/Review:
okay so having fun with angsty yohji? not for long i'm stealing him soon! muhaha
|
Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 13:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Excellent work. Looking forward to more.
|
Reviewed By: Ranmaru-MM don`t let me log in On: November 07, 2005 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got me, very fast!!! The only thing I want now, is another chapter asap. ^_~ Great work so far, Keep it up.
|
Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 06:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Very interesting start. Looking forward to reading more!
|
Title: Squee!!!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge--thought I was signed in! On: November 06, 2005 23:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, you got me. Got me, got me, got me. MORE!!! I'm so delighted with how you wrote Aya and Aya-chan, can't WAIT to see you handle Yohji. Hmm. If you're looking for constructive criticism, the only thing I can think of, is I would have tried to say it with less words. But that may just be a question of style, though, and the fact both of them are intelligent, educated people. I certainly am not complaining!! MORE!!!
|
Title: haha!
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 22:45 CST
Comment/Review:
i'm the first
|
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 22:45 CST
Comment/Review:
okay so a few things 1) what the hell took you so long??? 2) i know you've got more chapters so you know you are going to be harassed to update and 3) 1 and two should be enough (that's actually a line from the beautician and the beast sorry). okay I love your aya and aya-chan, she's a hard character to do...most of the time i end up hating her...and aya's doing great as floundering between being aya and ran. by the way what the hell did you do to my yohji?!?
|
| Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 ] |
