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| "Self Inflicted Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
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you've got to be kidding me. OOC, unrealistic, and incredibly emo. Kagome's got way more self-respect than that, it's almost insulting. And the poem sucked balls. speacial someone, my ass. Sounds like a buttload of self-pity to me. Get over yourself.
| Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I thought it was kinda pretty. In it's it's own disturbing, morbid way.
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked that your mechanics were decent; there was a new paragraph for every speaker; spelling was good; all that stuff some people think isn't important. I do have a couple of comments that are not too positive. 1) It wasn't clear to me whether this occurred in the Feudal Era or present. I was thrown by the mention of Kaede's house. 2) Inuyasha is strong. He is really strong. Remember back to the early episode when he fought that centipede thing that was after Kagome? He didn't have Tetsusaiga yet but he split that thing, armor and all, from one end to the other. If Inuyasha struck Kagome and didn't pull the blow, she would be dead. Also, does Inuyasha seem to you like a person who slaps? He might slash; he would have taken off Kagome's jaw but even a slap would have done that. What I'm trying to say here is Kagome wouldn't have needed the knife if Inuyasha was really serious.
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