| "Egao O Ageru" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 21:33 CST
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I really liked you fic, the idea of Sesshomaru in the present is quite amusing.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 22:38 CST
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You lost me when Sesshoumaru jumped in the well. If he can go through the well, why wouldn't Kouga follow Kagome, or Naraku, or Shippou? Or anyone?
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Reviewed By: Great!!! On: November 08, 2005 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arigatou for the thankyou. Great chapter!Keep up the good work! You said you liked my advice so I'll give you some more if you want. I would be really great if you made the chapters longer no matter how long it took you to put them on the internet. But I really love how descriptive you are and how the story flows smoothly. Update soon!!! FranklinBe
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Reviewed By: angel_of_music_dd [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 11:58 CST
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Uh huh I agree. Keep up the good work, just watch out I found a few tense mistakes in your first chap. Otherwise your writing is superb, and the vocabulary is delectable.
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Title: Egao O Ageru
Reviewed By: FranklinBe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. I like how you are very descriptive. Update soon and keep up the good work
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