| "Whispered Scars" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: *sniffle*
Reviewed By: Midnight*Reader On: June 29, 2008 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*snifFle*, how sweet and sad, although i'm glad Fai got his happy ending. Long live Fai and Kurogane! xD This story was simply amazing and I can't help but want to read it again.
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Reviewed By: Tainted D On: March 14, 2006 22:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved how you showed Fai's reluctance to take off his shirt and show his scars, both the physical ones and mental ones. Then how Kurogane kissed his scars. --Then how in the end he cried, not tears of pain, but of happiness. Beautifully done! *Hugs*
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Reviewed By: Tainted NLI On: February 03, 2006 08:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I felt bad for Fai as he was leaving the bathroom. That line is so true about being an excellent pretender. Putting on your happy face for others. I love how Kurogane is taking his time with him, trying to show him that the act can be pleasurable also. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 11:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved when Kurogane said he would undress also, to calm Fai down.During the flashback-I could feel Fai's pain with Ashura, and what he was doing to him. That was quite dark there, and very well written! I adore how Kurogane is taking his time with Fai! Wonderful chapter.
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 21:53 CST
Comment/Review:
This was really good. The whole part about hiding how he really feels from the world, and putting on a happy face. To pretend to be happy, when he is not. I hope Kurogane can get him to open up and talk about what happened. Then to heal the scars he has. Hope to see more soon!
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