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| "Completion" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: TenriKage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 11:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Kyuu! That's so sweet! Kakashi and Sakura are going to have a BABY!! Only thing, I don't think you get white hair at the age of twenty-three. On the other hand, Kakashi has a head full of white hair and he's only 26 at the beginning of the manga. *shrugs* Oh well! (i love him anyways!)
| Title: great job, mate.
Reviewed By: Kakashi95 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as with your other fanfics, this was written perfectly! in fact, this was flawless. the only reason it didnt get straight tens is 1:while its based on naruto, the creativity was reason for at least a seven. 2:some of it was over complicated. while i appreciate the way this is written (intelligently, of course) the amount of words that many people dont even know exists you used is kind of worrysome. this deserves attention, but the vocabulary used just might turn away potential fans. keep it intelligent, but dont make it overly so. once again, i LOVE your work, this no exception. kirbys approval? d(^_^)b "kirby approves of this fanfic!"
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