| "Such Great Heights" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: evilblackcat On: August 16, 2007 07:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this paring Eyes, Ayumu...and this story is sooo sexy and hot! This is the second time when I've readed your story, I don't remember where I've readed first...adultfanfiction or fanfiction...anyway this is great...and I agree with you, the end of spiral was just stupid...the story was unfinished
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Reviewed By: Alexandra LC On: January 13, 2007 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it. That's what I look for in a fic. And I agree with you, there are few spiral fics in this site so I encourage you to write more, I really liked your style. I think Ayumu was a little out of character but your Eyes was absolutely wonderful. Only, you continuously make spelling mistakes. I reccomend you get a beta reader, o even a friend to check your fic before submitting it. It's a fact most people like to read well-written fanfiction, and it gives you respect. It's not to criticize but if I can spot your mispellings, that's really bad. English is not my first language and I've learned it rather informally so I guess a native speaker would be more uncomfortable than me. Good Luck!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Triple S. On: October 15, 2006 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the enjoyment factor up there? it needs to go to about 1000.
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Reviewed By: RS Sykel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so cute!!! i love it way better then the two fics i wrote with them together... but the lemon has something to do with that... i can't write lemon only read it! but this story is amazing!!!! and i just want to think you for writing it cause i love it!!!
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Reviewed By: relientk_fan13 On: February 07, 2006 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY MOTHER******BEEP********* tht was so good, was this a one-dhot, i 4got 2 check ^^' hee hee hee, anywa, u have some great talent!, dang, good job 4 u, lol ^^ if it's not a one-shot i hope u decide 2 continue, tht was incedable! :}
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: LPGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 17:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I completely adored it! The whole thing is so sweet and God only knows how much I love Eyes descriptions. Keep up the good work and you're right, there aren't a lot of Spiral fics out there. Ja ne! ^-^
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Reviewed By: reason_gone On: December 23, 2005 05:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was very good. Are you going to continue?
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 21:01 CST
Comment/Review:
That was awesome! I love Eyes/Ayumu!! Is this story done? Write more please of this pairing! PLEASE?
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Reviewed By: bloody_black_valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!!!!! :D tht was SOOOOOOOO awsum, plz tell me tht ur going 2 write more!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
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