Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 21:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, not a bad story. It starts out well, and the parts with Davis's point of view work quite well. I like it, but I wish you would update. This story has a good start, but hasn't been worked on since. Please update, I'd keep reading at least.
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