| "Blood & Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 13:39 PST
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I had been wondering about Ginta and Hakkaku. They just don't seem the type to condone such behavior, especially to someone they refer to as "Sister". Thanks for setting my mind at ease.
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Title: hentai zero
Reviewed By: Hentai Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 00:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. This is a very powerful and well written fic. I commend you on the original storyline. My only suggestion would be that you make Inuyasha say keh a lot less. Instead you can have him say yeah or fine both informal words that his character would say, after all diction is important. Update soon and keep up the great writing!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 10:50 PST
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I can't believe that no one else has reviewed your story! They must be crazy, or just plain lazy. This is really one of the best out there and I'd hate for you to get discouraged at the lack of reviews. So, please don't! I'm sure that there are others out there who love your story just as much as I do!! As usual, this chapter was just as great as the previous ones. I can't wait to see what happens with Sess, Kag, and Inu. I'm sure it's going to be exciting if nothing else!!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 20:16 PST
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Ok, this story is freakin' HOT, yet at the same time sad due to the rape and all. Jeez, I feel weird writing that! But it's true! The scenes with both Sess, Inu, and Kag had me sweating!! Anywho, GREAT story, so please update soon!!
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