Title: Good News and Bad news Reviewed By: day_dreamers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 18:32 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Erik: this was well written and good how you described what u were doing and ur surroundings very well, although it seems too familiar to some anime's and books i have, doesnt seem all original. Victor: you steal, you reveal more than you need to reveal, the reactions arent even closely realistic, but other than that your writting was good, you just need to keep some things secretive, to make the reader want to read more
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