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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 19:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To put it mildly.....my heart just broke. Thanks for the update.....it was very well written. Take care!
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Title: duckgirl566
Reviewed By: duckgirl566 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 18:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duckgirl566: They haven't made up yet. Ducky alter ego: They haven't made up? Duckgirl566: Nope. Ducky alter ego: ...WHAA!
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 17:37 EDT
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Awww. This story just gets better and better. I noticed that your style of writing has improved and made it just that much better. I love this story and it's written so well and I can't wait to see if InuYasha really leaves to NY.
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Reviewed By: brazen thought On: September 14, 2006 14:25 EDT
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What the!? Why the hell is he going home?! He didn't even talk to Kagome. He should know by now that Kikyo is an evil witch who likes to hurt people. Dammit how could he just want to leave!!!!
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan (nsi) On: September 14, 2006 13:07 EDT
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WOW new chapter so soon yay! But Kagome and Inuyasha are still being idiots arg! He better see her before he just leaves, or thats a really expensive day trip. Yikes. Oh and I think the time difference between Tokyo and New York is give or take 12 hours, I have the same setting in my fic and it drives me crazy trying to figure out time changes haha. I feel your pain ;) Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: September 14, 2006 12:48 EDT
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please tell me you have pages of the next chappie written (i can't believe this one came out so fast) both inuyasha and kagome have real trust issues and neither one is telling the other the whole story. i can only hope that by some off chance they catch up with each other in japan or inuyasha calls home and rin or sess talks him into staying another day or so to talk to kagome. this feels more exciting now than when kouga was stalking kagome!
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Title: Chapter 28
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 14, 2006 12:07 EDT
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I can't believe that Inu is going to fly back home without even talking to Kagome. I can't believe that Kagome flew back to Japan without even talking to Inu....he helped her so much when she was new and lost in NY, and she has basically thrown his love back in his face. I am not normally "down" on Kagome, but at this point in this story, I am downright pissed at her. Mama Higurashi needs to have a long talk with her daughter and perhaps talk some sense into her....I hope. (I am also miffed that she didn't say goodbye to ANYONE! She isn't showing herself as much of a friend.)
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 14, 2006 11:54 EDT
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Just got done reading the lemon chapter. I was SOO glad that Inu and Kags finally truly got together. But then the skank-ho-clay-pot Kiky-ho had to showherself up. Why didn't Inu leave a NOTE, hello!? While I do feel some sympathy for Kagome, for the most part I am upset with her. She just told Inu that she loved him, but she is prepating to leave him without telling him anything or letting him explain what is goin on. That is poor form on her part - especially after all that he has done for and to her in the last 48 hours. sigh. Stupid girl. Off to read the next chapter
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 11:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Another painful chapter. I'm actually quite pissed at Kagome, wow. She's so stubborn and acts without reason, cripes, if you love someone you work things out and talk, not to mention she didn't have proof of anything. Now Inuyasha is going home! I feel bad for him being in the dark, it was a poor choice not to kick Kikyo out in the first place, but I don't think he deserves to be treated this way. Kagome would kind of deserve his going home again. Thanks for updating so quickly! Great chapter, can't wait for the next.
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Title: yasha21
Reviewed By: yasha21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 10:26 EDT
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saddness. good, but sad. dont leave inu!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 10:23 EDT
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Oh hell no, He can't leave not going half way around the world to just talk to her. And another think Inuyasha finally got a backbone he told Kikyou to fuck off!!! Please update soon after everything they need too be together.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 09:52 EDT
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What?!?! No , No , no, NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! This cannot be happening. I want to cry. Inuyasha don't leave!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 09:18 EDT
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I can't beleive he's just going to leave! He's followed her halfway around the world, what's a couple more hours gonna do? I'm so frustrated! Anyway, great chapter. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 07:25 EDT
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bad ending. Bad bad bad ending. They're susposed to make up! *sniff* Update soon! Or I'll die O.o...
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 07:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn...Theyre finally together - together, which was really good BTW...now this? OK Kags, what the hell's wrong with you ? Then Inu's just gonna go back home ? Damn sneaky wench and your cliffies, lol ....Well, ya got me on the edge of my seat yet again with all the drama and angest here ,lol....Cant wait to see what all goes on, but update when you can. :D
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