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Title: chap.25
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 01:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS......... AWESOME!!! GOD, WAS THAT GOOD! LAUGHS... HOTT.. >
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Title: w00t! w00t! w00t!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe-fucking-magnificent....you're kicking some awe-inspiring-mighty-major-ass here J-grrl ya know that? Very excellent chappie I must say. Just loved the beginning there too with that Kiss Me there from Inu. And Koga, being the dense-ass he is, was bound to show up sooner or later, hehe, but didnt he get a big-ass furry surprise, lol... Loved it! You really know how to tell a story....And I love the fact that you haven't put a full blown lemon in yet...what ya had him doin there towards the end there was too sexxay for words, but enough for me to go for a cold shower and the mighty bowl of M&Ms, lmao....keep it up J-grrl, this is great. :D
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life AKA Christina from the forum On: July 25, 2006 23:56 EDT
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That was sooo good. I KNEW that Koga was going to show up, from the second that Inu and Kag parted. Koga is such a bastard in this fic. *Beats him unconscious* And don't even get me started on Johnathon *kicks him in the family jewels* Kilala is the best. *huggles her* And Inuyasha...*glomps him* "I think he knocked me silly" I know it's bad but I giggled at that part. I know, I'm terrible! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Title: -insert maniac laughter here-
Reviewed By: Mizuhashi(Not logged in) On: July 25, 2006 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mother of God...I need a cold shower. That ending was...hot. It literally got me shivering and usually only a few spectacular writers, like CiraArana, can do that to me. And now I sound like a horny teenager bragging about their first time. -.-" Anywho, I was anticipating that whole Kouga meets up with Kagome, Inuyasha kicks his ass thing. That and anticipating when the flippin chapter would come out! Heh heh...yeaaaaa. Also that beginning with Inuyasha demanding that she kiss him... I'm sure that had all the girls swooning. I, for one, was thinking, "I want that! Now!" And which apparently I don't have that, and now I'm rambling about my personal life to a stranger over the internet and hundreds of others who actually read the reviews. ...I need a drink.
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa (NLI) On: July 25, 2006 23:18 EDT
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holy crap *blinks*wow you have a gift my friend, keep the fluffy stuff comeing!!!
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Reviewed By: keiko.chan On: July 25, 2006 23:01 EDT
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yup. ran here as fast as I could when I saw that post. lol WOW. lol. InuYasha toucing himself is SUCH a turn on. wikid-ness. wait. that's what you were waiting a year for??? *confused look* which part dangit??!! anywho. Keep on rawkin'
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Reviewed By: alakab4m On: July 25, 2006 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so good and i can't wait for you to update it. i love how you made it so dramatic and yet so sweet at the same time. keep up the good work! i can't wait to find out how it ends. write some more after you finish this story. (:
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: July 24, 2006 12:32 EDT
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Very cute and special chapter. Inu and Kag's interaction at the bar after that evening was great. The only problem I had with it was I now have the song crazy bitch stuck in my head. sigh.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me (who is not logged in) On: July 23, 2006 23:55 EDT
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Ive squeezed in some time to review, finally!!! Happy I made the date before you did another chapter, then it seems like I wasn't TOO late heheh. Again, I'll repeat, STUPENDOUS eppi!!!! The little smut in the beginning was a perfect touch. And best of all you didn't jump straight into the innuendo when Yasha and Kag got together BUT instead had just a bitsy limee lemon.........and THIS is what I LOVE ABOUT IT!!!!!!!! I abso-fucking-lutly hate the rushing of relationships that some writers do. People have to understand that just because you tell your feelings to someone, doesn't automatically mean you jump eachothers bones the next second........(not saying in real life we don't ::wink::). You get my drift though ne? I chat w/ this writer (InuGrrrl if you know her) and she can write sex like you wouldn't believe!!!! Now she is the ONLY one I know that can make fast relationships and TONS of smuttness (every chapter) work. Plus it will still be exciting every update. I have no clue how exactly she does it, she's just got talent. Like you do! ^_^ I'm uber loving this IY fic!!!!!! Probably ending up as one of my few favs and I'll definantly check into more of your master pieces! Lol! Be very proud of this saga cause its a fucking hot fic! And I can't wait for the soundtrack! I was excited when you added 'Dashboard Confessional'-s "Vindicated". Ive been looking for it for so shitting long after the first time I heard it on Spidermans ending song. Now I get it! YES!!!! LOL! Till we talk....ja ne! Remember, you FUCKING-ROCK-MY-SOCKS!!!!! heheh.....^_^ Sorry about the outburst.
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Reviewed By: Lakerchick2217 On: July 23, 2006 02:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been keeping up with your story from the beginning and I have to say that it just keeps getting better each and every update. I'm so excited for your next update, and hopefully that will be sometime in the near future!!! You're doing a wonderful job of writing this story! Everytime I read it it's almost like a can see it as I would a movie or something of the sort. Your discriptions are very detailed yet not to the point of over flowing the story with useless adjectives. It's quite refreshing!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: iconoclast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 09:55 EDT
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I'm one of your quintessential silently grateful readers, but I thought I'd leave a word or two behind as a thank you for the wonderful read. It's too bad that you don't do AU often -- I haven't read your other stories as only AU floats my boat, but if they are as good as Savvy is, I'd be sure to check them out. Keep up the good work and thanks again!
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 04:21 EDT
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I do NOT know where to start with this story. It was what a story SHOULD be: A freaking storynot some complicated hard to get plot. It was simple and lovely and made your emotions fall and rise right with the characters. It felt like I was watching a movie the whole time and could imagine everything. One word: Beautiful. Thank God I have Morpheous to download all the songs to give the story a better visual than you already provided. I spent all night and half the morning reading this from start and finish and I'm not disapointed not one bit and I can't wait for an update. Anyways, great story and I wish you luck and prosperity.
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Title: THANK YOU
Reviewed By: Bri-chan On: July 19, 2006 20:44 EDT
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*glomp* Thank you soooo much for updating (it felt like it was forever since you last updated). This chapter was wonderful! Keep up the excellent job and i can't wait for the next one. ^^
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Title: ;.;
Reviewed By: xXDarkLadyXx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 13:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you sooooooo much right now! what a wonderful chapter ;.; it makes my sunburn and bruises from ozzfest not hurt so much! and i love the music! if you ever do that cd thingy let me know! and as always please please please please update soon!
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Title: I love it!!!
Reviewed By: Tsukiko-Poo-Poo On: July 17, 2006 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your idea for this story! When I was looking through, I saw 'Savvy' and this was just after I watched Pirates of the Caribbean 2. Haha, so I clicked on it and I was blown away! Halfway through reading what you wrote, I had to stop and I almost cried!!! But then I got back online two days later and I am so HOOKED!!! I can NOT wait for you to write more!!! Eeeee!! I'm ganna die!!! I neeed my fix!! I read alot on here, I think I might just sign up...I like to write, I'm just scared to post anything. >__
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