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Reviewed By: Ochiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 07:36 EDT
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Yay, we finally know what happened with Kikyou! I'm sorry you got sick. >< I hope you feel better now. I can't wait to read the next chapter, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: apcfan11 On: July 03, 2006 04:17 EDT
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YAY! Yay yay yay yay yay!!! You updated! It kinda sucks that you got sick, so I can forgive you for missing a couple of days. *sticks tongue out* See, I am an obsessed fan fic reader, and your's is my new obsession. Therefore, I will continue to bother you every day until this story is finished. ^^ Just because you're a shiny writer. And from what can be drawn from the a/n's, a shiny person too. By the way, if you ever get bored, feel free to e-mail me. taintedblood17@yahoo.com Your most loyal, mini-shrine building reviewer... -Michelle
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was totally awesome...with how you explained Inu's life, Sess coming for him, all those that would've been directly effected if Kikyou had said anything. Then the whole thing with Kikyou. You said SO much in just one SHORT chapter. It was just great. Should be interesting to see how things go when they both wake up. Great chapter to an awesome story. Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 02:47 EDT
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Good chapter but I can't believe that whore kikyo did that to inuyasha that BITCH! At least he told what happened between them two to kagome who is by the being a very good person to inuyasha. So I hope you update soon. Oh and I'm glad that you feel better after that stomach virus, man do I know how that feels.
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Reviewed By: fonnngg shway On: July 03, 2006 02:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, you are too good! you show their emotions so well!!! please update!! ^_^
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 01:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say this chapter was just beautiful and sad I love the way you went from Inuyasha explaining the past to Kagome and the flash backs. And the ending was just too sweet. I can't wait till the next chapter. Stay well
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Reviewed By: kittycat925 (not logged on) On: July 03, 2006 01:10 EDT
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Awww...how cute of a way to end it...And I'm really glad that he told her everything, it will help him heal, and HOPEFULLY start something with Kagome...well, since you promised the next chapter to be a good one...I'll be waiting! Well, I'd be waiting even if it were a "bad" one.
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Reviewed By: Rinlover(offline) On: July 03, 2006 01:10 EDT
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O.o...The past is so painful. But nothing heals pain like DIRTY LEMONS BABY! ...*still hoping for a lemon soon* I know, its horriable. Also, sorry to hear about your stomach virus. Also, happy fourth of july! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ree_Revolution [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 00:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a terrific AU. In fact, one of the best I've had the opportunity to read. It's well written, and the not one of the various characters seems OOC, despite their new situations. Well done. I'm eager to read more. :]
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Reviewed By: kachiqua [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 11:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, this story is fantastic but PLEASE tell something is going to happen soon, PLEASE!!!! i'm dying to read the lemon...DYING. so yeah, update soon please. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kagome-sama9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 22:59 EDT
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hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry! I love it so much.I don't know how to express it! i can't help it! this story is so well written it might as well be real! Honestly, I don't know how you do it! I can't even do a three person dialogue and here you are writing like it was your own life! I honest to god love this story. I ask you, iie, BEG you to hurry with this. Onegai! Koishiteru! But, alas, I have to go now. Ja Ne! Red-kun
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Reviewed By: apcfan11 On: June 30, 2006 22:18 EDT
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*twitch* Update!!! It's been... *checks* like three days! *whines* Please!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, love the chapter and I hope you update soon. That was a good place were you put a stopping point I hope after that inuyasha and kagome will feel much better after that.
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Title: Woot
Reviewed By: DarkEskara On: June 29, 2006 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Woot
Reviewed By: DarkEskara On: June 29, 2006 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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