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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New chapter's great, I love it! Kouga and Kikyo should hookup, maybe those 2 mental fits will kill each other and leave everyone in peace. (HAHAHAHAHAHA)~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: haleos18 On: June 02, 2006 14:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry about your painful/itchy situation. hope you'll keep up the amazing chappies. *giant hug*
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: June 02, 2006 12:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. You actually took time with it and the plot is really good. Keep it up!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 10:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did it again, I just love this chapter. If Kikyou is in trouble let her stay in trouble.Hey, maybe Kouga got to her to get to Inuyasha what do you think? Can't wait till the next update. Reviews note: For the pitty party what should I bring ice cream or beer or pizza with everything? and the name of the song is "One Dead Bitch" (insert evil laughter here) Get well soon
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Reviewed By: U.C. On: June 02, 2006 09:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story! Not a super original plot, but you've really made it stand out. I love the characterization of Inuyasha. It's so true to his real character, It seems like too many people try to change him in AU's, but yours are dead on. Cant wait for the next chapter. UC
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Reviewed By: serendith_ On: June 02, 2006 07:03 EDT
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I am sorry to hear about all your troubles! I have to say that it didn't affect your writing though because that was a fantastic chapter!
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Reviewed By: xXDarkLadyXx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 06:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMNIT IGNORE KIKYOU LET HER DIE OR SOMETHING FUCKING PAIN IN THE ASS :breaths: i am not a kikyou fan could you guess? lol ^^; (looks innocent) and awwwwwwwwwwww he wrote her a song that was so cute, did you right that the lyrics were really good, i'd google it to check but i'm feeling lazy at 6am lol
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Title: WAIT FOR IT!!
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 04:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ready ready WOOT WOOT X2389472348723482384723482734237423 i love this story i really do hahaha and i really do hope you get all better soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sogi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 23:57 EDT
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And another fanart for you ^.^ this time it's Inuyasha http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/188537
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii (not signed in) On: June 01, 2006 21:35 EDT
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great chapters! i really am enjoying this fic so please continue. i can't wait to read the next chapter :)
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 12:06 EDT
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I read through this chapter for the second time today and enjoyed it just as much as I did the first time. I didn't post a review the first time simply because I couldn't think of anything new that I could say. Sometimes it takes awhile. I admit, I was scared for a moment when we found out Kouga was just outside the building and Inuyasha was away taking care of Kikyou (this had a vague similarity to the real story that was surprising, kudos). However, Inuyasha made it back in time, so all was good. My only suggestion is to clean up the fight scene a bit, I don't know about anyone else, but I was a bit confused about what was going on. I was also glad to see Inuyasha take a chill pill and tell Kagome the truth, 'cause really, it would be dangerous for her if he didn't. Kagome took the news very well and there wasn't nearly as much yelling as I thought there would be. Good on ya :D All in all, you keep impressing me with your plot and character development choices, keeping this story fresh and enjoyable. Keep up the hard work! PS. there were a few grammar errors, small things that a careful read through could pick up. eg. ""Kouga can track you, Kagome?" " I don't think you ment to put a question mark there. :)
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Title: HAH!
Reviewed By: ShaylaBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kouga got his ass beat lol, inu n kag r so cute 2gether. im not a violent person...most of the time...
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Reviewed By: Lil_Pix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 12:10 EDT
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yay! i love your stry im glad you were finally able to update again! i look forward to the next chapter
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Title: LUV IT =)
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 10:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAZE WRITE MORE!!!! THE STORYS GREAT I WANNA READ WUTS GUNNA HAPPEN NEXT KEEP UP DA GUD WORK X D
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: HENDYCANDY On: May 31, 2006 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS REALLY NICE..INTERESTING.HEHEHEHE..NICE!c",)
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